Wednesday, 28 August 2013

Writing term 3

Walt-use a many language features in our poem.


Onomatopoeia
Assonance
Metaphor 

I threw a bottle in the gutter, not knowing where it goes.
On the ocean where it lies,
killing innocent lives.
Plastic bags wrapped around necks, milk tops in stomachs and soda bottles as homes.
Fishes lives are filled with plastic,
a clean ocean would be fantastic.
A life of rubbish is what we are living, the garbage patch you mean the death patch.
SPLASH
Theres another pile of filth that covers our marine life's lives and homes.
We are ignorant people that do not care about our sea.

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